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【<】【p】【>】【树】【欲】【静】【而】【风】【不】【止】【,】【子】【欲】【养】【而】【亲】【不】【待】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【近】【年】【来】【,】【中】【考】【作】【文】【试】【题】【讲】【求】【全】【面】【对】【接】【中】【学】【生】【生】【活】【,】【强】【调】【表】【达】【真】【情】【实】【感】【,】【鼓】【励】【学】【生】【表】【露】【自】【己】【的】【真】【实】【情】【怀】【,】【真】【正】【做】【到】【“】【说】【真】【话】【、】【实】【话】【、】【心】【里】【话】【,】【不】【说】【假】【话】【、】【空】【话】【、】【套】【话】【”】【(】【《】【语】【文】【课】【程】【标】【准】【》】【)】【。】【这】【样】【,】【才】【能】【实】【现】【“】【引】【导】【学】【生】【关】【注】【现】【实】【,】【热】【爱】【生】【活】【,】【表】【达】【真】【情】【实】【感】【”】【的】【目】【标】【。】【因】【此】【,】【命】【题】【者】【常】【着】【眼】【于】【以】【下】【四】【个】【方】【面】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【“】【自】【我】【成】【长】【”】【类】【从】【中】【考】【命】【题】【形】【势】【看】【,】【自】【我】【成】【长】【类】【考】【题】【在】【逐】【年】【升】【温】【。】【专】【家】【预】【测】【,】【在】【推】【行】【课】【程】【改】【革】【、】【强】【调】【人】【文】【关】【怀】【的】【新】【时】【代】【,】【此】【类】【考】【题】【会】【逐】【渐】【成】【为】【命】【题】【的】【核】【心】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【自】【我】【成】【长】【类】【文】【章】【,】【有】【三】【条】【出】【彩】【捷】【径】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【1】【)】【展】【示】【真】【我】【风】【采】【,】【内】【容】【求】【新】【。】【尺】【有】【所】【短】【,】【寸】【有】【所】【长】【,】【也】【许】【你】【无】【法】【在】【课】【堂】【上】【侃】【侃】【而】【谈】【,】【但】【你】【可】【以】【在】【球】【场】【上】【一】【马】【当】【先】【;】【也】【许】【你】【无】【法】【在】【舞】【台】【上】【一】【展】【歌】【喉】【,】【但】【你】【可】【以】【在】【考】【场】【上】【胸】【有】【成】【竹】【…】【…】【只】【要】【我】【们】【找】【准】【了】【自】【我】【的】【闪】【光】【点】【,】【精】【彩】【的】【素】【材】【就】【会】【扑】【面】【而】【来】【。】【比】【如】【你】【爱】【好】【音】【乐】【,】【对】【经】【典】【的】【歌】【词】【与】【动】【听】【的】【旋】【律】【自】【然】【会】【情】【有】【独】【钟】【;】【如】【果】【你】【爱】【好】【文】【学】【,】【名】【言】【佳】【句】【与】【诗】【词】【典】【故】【定】【可】【信】【手】【拈】【来】【。】【只】【要】【你】【爱】【好】【写】【作】【,】【往】【往】【能】【有】【意】【想】【不】【到】【的】【收】【获】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【2】【)】【述】【说】【成】【长】【故】【事】【,】【情】【节】【求】【巧】【。】【人】【生】【路】【上】【,】【不】【会】【一】【帆】【风】【顺】【。】【成】【长】【的】【过】【程】【,】【苦】【辣】【酸】【甜】【咸】【,】【五】【味】【俱】【全】【。】【我】【们】【若】【能】【抓】【住】【这】【一】【点】【做】【文】【章】【,】【情】【节】【自】【然】【会】【波】【澜】【迭】【起】【,】【内】【容】【自】【然】【会】【扣】【人】【心】【弦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【3】【)】【融】【入】【感】【情】【清】【泉】【,】【情】【感】【求】【真】【。】【能】【否】【感】【动】【读】【者】【要】【看】【你】【是】【否】【能】【融】【入】【真】【实】【的】【情】【感】【。】【要】【学】【会】【将】【心】【灵】【深】【处】【最】【精】【彩】【的】【点】【滴】【,】【用】【真】【挚】【的】【感】【情】【诉】【诸】【笔】【端】【,】【这】【样】【,】【一】【个】【表】【情】【或】【—】【个】【动】【作】【,】【也】【许】【就】【是】【一】【道】【风】【景】【,】【细】【细】【地】【品】【味】【起】【来】【,】【那】【酸】【甜】【苦】【辣】【的】【味】【儿】【,】【也】【会】【让】【你】【如】【同】【口】【含】【橄】【榄】【,】【回】【味】【无】【穷】【。】【基】【本】【做】【法】【就】【是】【在】【命】【题】【作】【文】【中】【常】【以】【“】【我】【”】【为】【中】【心】【拟】【定】【,】【比】【如】【“】【我】【和】【”】【“】【我】【多】【么】【想】【”】【“】【我】【的】【特】【长】【”】【“】【没】【想】【到】【我】【如】【此】【”】【“】【为】【自】【己】【而】【骄】【傲】【”】【“】【我】【们】【这】【些】【人】【”】【等】【。】【又】【比】【如】【,】【以】【“】【成】【长】【”】【“】【第】【一】【次】【”】【“】【秘】【密】【”】【“】【个】【性】【”】【“】【朋】【友】【”】【“】【回】【答】【”】【“】【做】【好】【准】【备】【”】【等】【为】【主】【题】【写】【作】【,】【内】【容】【上】【贴】【近】【学】【生】【的】【成】【长】【经】【历】【,】【密】【切】【联】【系】【他】【们】【的】【生】【活】【实】【际】【,】【他】【们】【体】【会】【最】【深】【,】【感】【受】【也】【多】【,】【容】【易】【下】【笔】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【“】【素】【质】【情】【感】【”】【类】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【比】【如】【以】【“】【感】【受】【快】【乐】【”】【“】【喜】【欢】【”】【“】【兑】【现】【诺】【言】【”】【“】【美】【德】【”】【“】【珍】【爱】【”】【“】【吃】【苦】【”】【“】【宽】【容】【”】【“】【体】【谅】【”】【“】【温】【暖】【”】【“】【友】【好】【”】【“】【健】【康】【”】【等】【为】【主】【题】【写】【作】【,】【就】【能】【够】【引】【导】【学】【生】【关】【注】【人】【性】【中】【美】【好】【的】【事】【物】【和】【美】【好】【的】【情】【感】【,】【让】【考】【生】【在】【深】【入】【思】【考】【的】【过】【程】【中】【加】【深】【对】【真】【、】【善】【、】【美】【的】【体】【验】【和】【向】【往】【。】【例】【如】【:】【2】【0】【1】【0】【年】【广】【东】【卷】【:】【“】【那】【天】【,】【我】【见】【到】【了】【快】【乐】【的】【钥】【匙】【”】【;】【2】【0】【1】【0】【年】【江】【苏】【南】【通】【卷】【:】【“】【让】【我】【轻】【轻】【告】【诉】【你】【”】【;】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【安】【徽】【省】【卷】【:】【“】【在】【我】【们】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【”】【;】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【陕】【西】【卷】【:】【“】【我】【想】【看】【见】【你】【的】【笑】【”】【等】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【“】【社】【会】【生】【活】【”】【类】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【比】【如】【以】【“】【奥】【运】【”】【“】【和】【谐】【”】【“】【交】【往】【”】【“】【贫】【困】【”】【“】【公】【开】【”】【“】【帮】【助】【”】【“】【关】【注】【”】【“】【动】【力】【”】【“】【书】【”】【“】【回】【忆】【”】【“】【细】【节】【”】【“】【习】【惯】【”】【“】【学】【习】【”】【“】【水】【”】【等】【为】【主】【题】【写】【作】【,】【可】【以】【引】【导】【学】【生】【关】【注】【身】【边】【的】【热】【点】【话】【题】【,】【放】【眼】【社】【会】【生】【活】【。】【例】【如】【:】【2】【0】【0】【8】【年】【湖】【北】【宜】【昌】【卷】【:】【“】【汶】【川】【地】【震】【有】【巨】【大】【破】【坏】【力】【的】【原】【因】【”】【明】【显】【是】【扣】【“】【四】【川】【汶】【川】【大】【地】【震】【”】【的】【主】【题】【;】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【浙】【江】【嘉】【兴】【卷】【:】【“】【不】【走】【寻】【常】【路】【”】【明】【显】【是】【扣】【“】【周】【杰】【伦】【”】【和】【“】【蔡】【伟】【”】【两】【位】【热】【点】【人】【物】【;】【2】【0】【1】【0】【年】【吉】【林】【卷】【:】【“】【天】【使】【让】【人】【牵】【挂】【”】【明】【显】【是】【扣】【“】【上】【海】【世】【博】【会】【”】【和】【“】【青】【海】【玉】【树】【地】【震】【”】【这】【两】【大】【新】【闻】【事】【件】【。】【再】【如】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【四】【川】【内】【江】【中】【考】【作】【文】【题】【,】【是】【一】【道】【典】【型】【的】【材】【料】【作】【文】【题】【,】【材】【料】【便】【摘】【自】【《】【华】【西】【都】【市】【报】【》】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【4】【.】【“】【想】【象】【创】【新】【”】【类】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【类】【试】【题】【如】【果】【处】【理】【不】【当】【,】【过】【于】【脱】【离】【学】【生】【生】【活】【,】【就】【会】【助】【长】【“】【假】【、】【大】【、】【空】【”】【风】【气】【的】【盛】【行】【。】【命】【题】【时】【要】【有】【利】【于】【写】【作】【者】【从】【生】【活】【出】【发】【,】【大】【胆】【展】【开】【想】【象】【的】【翅】【膀】【。】【如】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【江】【苏】【徐】【州】【卷】【:】【“】【面】【对】【自】【然】【”】【;】【2】【0】【1】【0】【年】【河】【北】【卷】【:】【“】【—】【—】【来】【了】【”】【;】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【山】【东】【德】【州】【卷】【:】【“】【风】【筝】【”】【等】【,】【让】【学】【生】【在】【想】【象】【中】【创】【新】【,】【在】【创】【新】【中】【展】【示】【风】【采】【。】胃痉挛【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【平】【时】【作】【文】【和】【中】【考】【作】【文】【中】【,】【同】【学】【们】【写】【得】【最】【多】【、】【最】【熟】【悉】【、】【最】【拿】【手】【的】【文】【体】【当】【属】【记】【叙】【文】【。】【由】【于】【是】【最】【熟】【悉】【的】【文】【体】【,】【一】【些】【同】【学】【反】【而】【掉】【以】【轻】【心】【,】【出】【现】【了】【一】【些】【不】【应】【有】【的】【失】【误】【。】【现】【针】【对】【这】【些】【失】【误】【提】【出】【相】【应】【对】【策】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【构】【思】【欠】【巧】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【文】【似】【看】【山】【不】【喜】【平】【”】【。】【写】【记】【叙】【文】【最】【忌】【平】【铺】【直】【叙】【,】【缺】【乏】【悬】【念】【。】【那】【样】【写】【出】【来】【的】【文】【章】【就】【像】【是】【—】【杯】【白】【开】【水】【,】【淡】【而】【无】【味】【。】【请】【看】【下】【例】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【今】【天】【的】【语】【文】【课】【上】【,】【一】【向】【不】【迟】【到】【的】【班】【长】【刘】【莹】【竟】【然】【迟】【到】【了】【半】【个】【小】【时】【,】【因】【为】【今】【天】【早】【上】【在】【去】【上】【学】【的】【路】【上】【,】【张】【莹】【看】【到】【一】【个】【白】【发】【苍】【苍】【的】【老】【奶】【奶】【倒】【在】【马】【路】【边】【,】【就】【毫】【不】【犹】【豫】【地】【把】【她】【扶】【了】【起】【来】【,】【并】【热】【情】【地】【把】【她】【送】【到】【了】【家】【,】【更】【让】【人】【意】【想】【不】【到】【的】【是】【,】【这】【个】【老】【奶】【奶】【竞】【是】【班】【主】【任】【的】【丈】【母】【娘】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【原】【以】【为】【做】【人】【只】【要】【管】【好】【自】【己】【就】【行】【,】【根】【本】【不】【需】【要】【“】【多】【管】【闲】【事】【”】【。】【因】【为】【我】【早】【听】【到】【有】【一】【句】【话】【叫】【“】【各】【人】【自】【扫】【门】【前】【雪】【,】【休】【管】【他】【人】【瓦】【上】【霜】【”】【。】【(】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【北】【京】【市】【中】【考】【作】【文】【《】【日】【积】【月】【累】【》】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【样】【的】【叙】【事】【就】【非】【常】【平】【淡】【,】【也】【不】【能】【引】【人】【入】【胜】【。】【同】【样】【的】【内】【容】【,】【如】【果】【我】【们】【换】【一】【种】【构】【思】【,】【文】【章】【立】【刻】【就】【会】【生】【动】【许】【多】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【原】【以】【为】【做】【人】【只】【要】【管】【好】【自】【己】【就】【行】【,】【根】【本】【不】【需】【要】【“】【多】【管】【闲】【事】【”】【。】【因】【为】【我】【早】【听】【到】【有】【一】【句】【话】【叫】【“】【各】【人】【自】【扫】【门】【前】【雪】【,】【休】【管】【他】【人】【瓦】【上】【霜】【”】【。】【直】【到】【那】【件】【事】【的】【发】【生】【才】【彻】【底】【改】【变】【了】【我】【对】【人】【生】【日】【积】【月】【累】【的】【看】【法】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【语】【文】【课】【正】【在】【进】【行】【,】【从】【未】【迟】【到】【过】【的】【班】【长】【张】【莹】【,】【在】【上】【午】【第】【一】【节】【课】【快】【要】【结】【束】【的】【时】【候】【,】【才】【上】【气】【不】【接】【下】【气】【地】【出】【现】【在】【教】【室】【门】【口】【。】【为】【了】【不】【影】【响】【上】【课】【,】【正】【在】【上】【课】【的】【老】【师】【,】【只】【是】【向】【她】【点】【了】【点】【头】【,】【示】【意】【她】【先】【进】【教】【室】【上】【课】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【心】【想】【,】【这】【下】【班】【长】【要】【倒】【霉】【了】【吧】【!】【平】【时】【就】【喜】【欢】【多】【管】【闲】【事】【的】【她】【,】【这】【下】【不】【知】【道】【又】【管】【了】【件】【什】【么】【闲】【事】【,】【以】【至】【于】【耽】【误】【了】【上】【课】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【想】【到】【上】【午】【第】【四】【节】【班】【会】【,】【班】【主】【任】【竟】【表】【扬】【了】【她】【。】【原】【来】【今】【天】【早】【上】【在】【去】【上】【学】【的】【路】【上】【,】【张】【莹】【看】【到】【一】【个】【白】【发】【苍】【苍】【的】【老】【奶】【奶】【倒】【在】【马】【路】【边】【,】【就】【亳】【不】【犹】【豫】【地】【把】【她】【扶】【了】【起】【来】【,】【并】【热】【情】【地】【把】【她】【送】【到】【了】【家】【。】【更】【让】【人】【意】【想】【不】【到】【的】【是】【,】【这】【个】【老】【奶】【奶】【竟】【是】【班】【主】【任】【的】【丈】【母】【娘】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【改】【后】【的】【片】【段】【,】【虽】【然】【也】【是】【倒】【叙】【;】【但】【增】【加】【了】【人】【物】【的】【心】【理】【描】【写】【、】【细】【节】【描】【写】【,】【情】【节】【曲】【折】【有】【味】【而】【富】【有】【悬】【念】【,】【引】【人】【入】【胜】【,】【而】【且】【点】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【记】【叙】【文】【,】【为】【了】【避】【免】【平】【铺】【直】【叙】【的】【弊】【端】【,】【可】【以】【从】【—】【件】【事】【的】【结】【果】【写】【起】【,】【也】【可】【以】【从】【一】【件】【事】【的】【中】【间】【写】【起】【,】【还】【可】【以】【用】【一】【件】【事】【来】【引】【出】【另】【一】【件】【事】【(】【当】【然】【也】【要】【有】【主】【次】【之】【分】【)】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【感】【情】【欠】【真】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【无】【论】【何】【种】【题】【材】【的】【记】【叙】【文】【,】【都】【应】【该】【写】【出】【真】【情】【实】【感】【,】【这】【也】【是】【一】【类】【文】【得】【分】【的】【一】【个】【重】【要】【标】【准】【。】【然】【而】【,】【有】【的】【同】【学】【认】【为】【只】【要】【把】【事】【件】【叙】【述】【清】【楚】【就】【可】【以】【了】【,】【由】【于】【没】【有】【真】【情】【实】【感】【,】【内】【容】【显】【得】【枯】【燥】【乏】【味】【;】【相】【反】【,】【有】【的】【同】【学】【为】【了】【写】【出】【“】【真】【情】【实】【感】【”】【而】【弄】【虚】【作】【假】【。】【请】【看】【下】【例】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【得】【有】【天】【夜】【里】【,】【我】【因】【为】【打】【摆】【子】【浑】【身】【发】【冷】【,】【躺】【在】【床】【上】【翻】【来】【覆】【去】【地】【睡】【不】【着】【。】【外】【婆】【听】【到】【我】【的】【声】【音】【,】【感】【觉】【有】【点】【儿】【不】【对】【,】【赶】【紧】【起】【床】【,】【用】【手】【摸】【摸】【我】【身】【上】【:】【“】【呀】【,】【小】【敏】【。】【你】【怎】【么】【在】【发】【抖】【呀】【!】【得】【赶】【紧】【去】【医】【院】【!】【”】【说】【着】【外】【婆】【把】【我】【抱】【起】【来】【,】【就】【往】【医】【院】【跑】【。】【我】【躺】【在】【外】【婆】【怀】【里】【,】【感】【觉】【外】【婆】【的】【胸】【怀】【是】【那】【么】【的】【温】【暖】【,】【外】【婆】【的】【脸】【庞】【是】【那】【么】【的】【慈】【祥】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【孩】【子】【,】【别】【怕】【,】【就】【到】【医】【院】【了】【。】【”】【外】【婆】【一】【边】【跑】【,】【一】【边】【喘】【着】【气】【对】【我】【说】【。】【尽】【管】【马】【路】【上】【北】【风】【呼】【啸】【,】【可】【听】【了】【外】【婆】【这】【有】【温】【度】【的】【话】【语】【,】【我】【身】【上】【立】【刻】【感】【觉】【暖】【和】【多】【了】【。】【(】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【沈】【阳】【市】【中】【考】【作】【文】【《】【有】【温】【度】【的】【话】【语】【》】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【外】【婆】【把】【我】【抱】【起】【来】【,】【就】【往】【医】【院】【跑】【。】【”】【让】【人】【感】【觉】【有】【假】【。】【一】【是】【文】【中】【的】【“】【我】【”】【已】【是】【—】【个】【初】【中】【生】【,】【外】【婆】【不】【一】【定】【就】【能】【抱】【得】【动】【;】【二】【是】【现】【在】【的】【通】【信】【和】【交】【通】【都】【非】【常】【发】【达】【,】【外】【婆】【为】【何】【不】【打】【1】【2】【0】【急】【救】【电】【话】【,】【或】【者】【坐】【其】【他】【交】【通】【工】【具】【,】【这】【样】【不】【是】【更】【快】【吗】【?】【第】【三】【,】【既】【然】【是】【深】【夜】【,】【外】【婆】【的】【脸】【庞】【怎】【么】【可】【能】【看】【得】【清】【?】【下】【面】【的】【修】【改】【,】【就】【真】【实】【多】【了】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【…】【…】【说】【着】【外】【婆】【就】【给】【1】【2】【0】【打】【了】【电】【话】【,】【很】【快】【救】【护】【车】【来】【了】【。】【外】【婆】【手】【脚】【麻】【利】【地】【帮】【我】【穿】【好】【衣】【服】【,】【扶】【着】【我】【上】【了】【车】【。】【在】【车】【上】【,】【我】【躺】【在】【外】【婆】【怀】【里】【,】【感】【觉】【外】【婆】【的】【胸】【怀】【是】【那】【么】【的】【温】【暖】【,】【借】【着】【车】【内】【的】【灯】【光】【,】【我】【发】【现】【外】【婆】【的】【脸】【庞】【是】【那】【么】【的】【慈】【祥】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【孩】【子】【,】【别】【怕】【,】【就】【到】【医】【院】【了】【。】【”】【外】【婆】【慈】【爱】【地】【摸】【着】【我】【的】【头】【安】【慰】【我】【。】【尽】【管】【马】【路】【上】【冷】【风】【呼】【啸】【,】【可】【听】【了】【外】【婆】【这】【有】【温】【度】【的】【话】【语】【,】【我】【身】【上】【立】【刻】【感】【觉】【温】【暖】【了】【许】【多】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【通】【过】【以】【上】【可】【以】【看】【出】【,】【只】【有】【所】【叙】【之】【事】【符】【合】【生】【活】【的】【情】【理】【,】【才】【有】【可】【能】【写】【出】【真】【情】【实】【感】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【的】【同】【学】【或】【许】【会】【问】【,】【记】【叙】【文】【可】【不】【可】【以】【虚】【构】【?】【回】【答】【是】【:】【可】【以】【。】【但】【尽】【可】【能】【写】【生】【活】【中】【的】【实】【事】【,】【也】【可】【以】【把】【发】【生】【在】【别】【人】【身】【上】【的】【事】【“】【嫁】【接】【”】【到】【自】【己】【身】【上】【,】【即】【鲁】【迅】【先】【生】【所】【说】【的】【“】【杂】【取】【种】【种】【人】【,】【合】【成】【一】【个】【”】【,】【这】【样】【就】【比】【较】【容】【易】【写】【出】【真】【情】【实】【感】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【立】【意】【欠】【深】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【立】【意】【即】【文】【章】【所】【要】【表】【达】【的】【主】【题】【。】【所】【谓】【立】【意】【深】【,】【就】【是】【所】【表】【现】【的】【主】【题】【不】【是】【人】【云】【亦】【云】【的】【,】【而】【是】【新】【颖】【独】【到】【,】【给】【人】【以】【启】【发】【鼓】【舞】【。】【有】【的】【同】【学】【写】【中】【考】【作】【文】【(】【特】【别】【是】【写】【材】【料】【作】【文】【和】【话】【题】【作】【文】【)】【时】【,】【不】【去】【深】【入】【分】【析】【现】【象】【背】【后】【的】【本】【质】【,】【也】【不】【去】【探】【究】【问】【题】【形】【成】【的】【深】【层】【原】【因】【,】【只】【是】【表】【面】【上】【浮】【光】【掠】【影】【地】【说】【一】【说】【,】【谈】【一】【谈】【,】【或】【就】【事】【论】【事】【,】【这】【就】【是】【立】【意】【欠】【深】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【湖】【南】【邵】【阳】【中】【考】【作】【文】【(】【二】【选】【一】【)】【,】【要】【求】【以】【“】【冬】【天】【里】【的】【一】【缕】【阳】【光】【”】【为】【题】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【不】【少】【于】【6】【0】【0】【字】【的】【作】【文】【(】【文】【体】【不】【限】【)】【。】【有】【的】【同】【学】【确】【立】【的】【主】【题】【是】【:】【冬】【天】【里】【的】【阳】【光】【无】【比】【温】【暖】【,】【人】【们】【在】【阳】【光】【下】【快】【乐】【的】【生】【活】【;】【有】【的】【同】【学】【确】【立】【的】【主】【题】【是】【:】【万】【物】【生】【长】【靠】【太】【阳】【,】【冬】【日】【里】【人】【和】【动】【植】【物】【都】【格】【外】【需】【要】【阳】【光】【;】【有】【的】【同】【学】【确】【立】【的】【主】【题】【是】【:】【冬】【天】【里】【人】【们】【渴】【望】【阳】【光】【的】【温】【暖】【,】【尤】【其】【冰】【天】【雪】【地】【的】【时】【候】【,】【等】【等】【。】【很】【明】【显】【以】【上】【立】【意】【都】【是】【从】【太】【阳】【的】【本】【义】【出】【发】【,】【没】【有】【上】【升】【到】【一】【个】【哲】【理】【的】【高】【度】【。】【而】【有】【的】【同】【学】【从】【“】【亲】【情】【(】【或】【友】【情】【)】【就】【像】【是】【冬】【日】【里】【的】【一】【缕】【阳】【光】【”】【来】【立】【意】【,】【就】【深】【刻】【多】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【只】【有】【透】【过】【事】【物】【的】【现】【象】【来】【观】【照】【生】【活】【,】【感】【悟】【生】【活】【,】【揭】【示】【事】【物】【与】【生】【活】【的】【内】【在】【联】【系】【,】【方】【能】【立】【意】【深】【刻】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【、】【用】【语】【欠】【准】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【具】【体】【表】【现】【在】【用】【语】【不】【够】【得】【体】【,】【不】【能】【做】【到】【文】【从】【句】【顺】【,】【语】【言】【欠】【生】【动】【,】【缺】【乏】【文】【采】【,】【甚】【至】【有】【错】【字】【病】【句】【等】【。】【如】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【中】【时】【代】【,】【正】【是】【人】【生】【的】【花】【季】【,】【也】【是】【我】【们】【最】【快】【乐】【最】【富】【有】【激】【情】【的】【时】【代】【,】【同】【样】【也】【是】【我】【们】【最】【懵】【懂】【、】【头】【脑】【最】【容】【易】【发】【热】【的】【时】【代】【。】【所】【以】【,】【我】【们】【还】【需】【要】【父】【母】【的】【指】【导】【,】【老】【师】【的】【教】【诲】【,】【我】【们】【必】【须】【学】【会】【从】【小】【事】【做】【起】【,】【比】【如】【做】【最】【简】【单】【的】【饭】【菜】【,】【练】【习】【洗】【自】【己】【的】【衣】【服】【,】【自】【己】【收】【拾】【房】【间】【等】【等】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【于】【是】【,】【我】【们】【渐】【渐】【明】【白】【一】【个】【道】【理】【—】【—】【学】【会】【自】【立】【,】【因】【为】【总】【有】【一】【天】【,】【我】【们】【要】【离】【开】【父】【母】【自】【己】【来】【成】【家】【立】【业】【。】【(】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【安】【徽】【省】【中】【考】【作】【文】【《】【在】【我】【们】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【》】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【样】【的】【用】【语】【实】【在】【是】【淡】【而】【无】【味】【,】【尽】【管】【说】【的】【都】【是】【大】【实】【话】【,】【却】【毫】【无】【文】【采】【可】【言】【。】【如】【果】【我】【们】【能】【展】【开】【想】【象】【,】【适】【当】【地】【使】【用】【一】【些】【比】【喻】【、】【对】【偶】【、】【拟】【人】【等】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【,】【语】【言】【立】【刻】【就】【会】【生】【动】【起】【来】【。】【下】【面】【是】【—】【个】【同】【学】【对】【此】【所】【作】【的】【修】【改】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【中】【时】【代】【,】【正】【值】【人】【生】【的】【花】【季】【。】【在】【我】【们】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【,】【看】【天】【,】【天】【是】【蓝】【的】【;】【看】【水】【,】【水】【是】【绿】【的】【。】【走】【在】【路】【上】【,】【花】【儿】【向】【我】【点】【头】【笑】【,】【风】【儿】【伴】【我】【低】【声】【唱】【,】【阳】【光】【暖】【在】【我】【心】【间】【…】【…】【一】【切】【都】【是】【那】【么】【美】【好】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【我】【们】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【,】【说】【懵】【懂】【也】【不】【尽】【然】【,】【说】【冷】【静】【有】【时】【头】【脑】【也】【发】【热】【。】【许】【多】【时】【候】【,】【许】【多】【事】【情】【,】【还】【需】【要】【父】【母】【的】【指】【点】【和】【帮】【助】【,】【许】【多】【道】【理】【还】【需】【要】【老】【师】【来】【点】【拨】【和】【启】【发】【。】【于】【是】【,】【属】【于】【我】【们】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【的】【我】【们】【还】【是】【从】【生】【活】【中】【的】【小】【事】【做】【起】【吧】【!】【我】【们】【开】【始】【学】【做】【最】【简】【单】【的】【饭】【菜】【,】【练】【习】【洗】【自】【己】【的】【衣】【服】【,】【像】【妈】【妈】【那】【样】【尝】【试】【把】【自】【己】【的】【房】【间】【收】【拾】【得】【整】【齐】【干】【净】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【渐】【渐】【地】【,】【我】【们】【明】【白】【一】【个】【道】【理】【:】【要】【长】【大】【,】【就】【要】【学】【会】【自】【立】【。】【因】【为】【父】【母】【的】【羽】【翼】【再】【温】【暖】【,】【总】【有】【一】【天】【我】【们】【也】【要】【靠】【自】【己】【的】【翅】【膀】【飞】【翔】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【上】【例】【不】【难】【看】【出】【,】【用】【语】【准】【确】【的】【方】【法】【是】【适】【当】【地】【使】【用】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【(】【如】【上】【例】【就】【使】【用】【了】【比】【喻】【、】【排】【比】【、】【拟】【人】【和】【对】【偶】【等】【修】【辞】【)】【,】【选】【用】【富】【有】【表】【现】【力】【的】【词】【语】【(】【主】【要】【是】【动】【词】【、】【形】【容】【词】【和】【成】【语】【)】【,】【有】【时】【候】【还】【可】【以】【恰】【当】【地】【引】【用】【名】【言】【和】【俗】【语】【等】【等】【。】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【常】【常】【想】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【离】【别】【会】【是】【背】【影】【的】【凝】【望】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【把】【身】【躯】【站】【成】【树】【的】【形】【象】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【任】【眼】【泪】【奔】【涌】【、】【泛】【滥】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【常】【常】【想】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【离】【别】【会】【是】【心】【的】【涅】【槃】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【需】【要】【时】【间】【的】【营】【养】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【再】【让】【它】【诞】【生】【、】【成】【长】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【然】【而】【,】【我】【站】【在】【六】【月】【的】【路】【口】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【整】【理】【着】【远】【方】【的】【行】【囊】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【心】【情】【却】【格】【外】【的】【晴】【朗】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【电】【话】【里】【欣】【喜】【地】【告】【诉】【爹】【娘】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【今】【年】【毕】【业】【升】【学】【明】【朗】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【几】【年】【里】【,】【恩】【师】【的】【语】【重】【心】【长】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【足】【够】【支】【撑】【我】【们】【一】【辈】【子】【的】【飞】【翔】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【些】【年】【啊】【,】【教】【学】【楼】【前】【的】【松】【柏】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【可】【曾】【记】【得】【,】【晨】【光】【中】【的】【一】【群】【少】【年】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【脚】【步】【匆】【匆】【,】【眸】【子】【明】【亮】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【课】【堂】【上】【,】【可】【爱】【的】【老】【师】【神】【采】【飞】【扬】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【带】【着】【我】【们】【遨】【游】【知】【识】【的】【殿】【堂】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【有】【什】【么】【更】【叫】【人】【惆】【怅】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【依】【靠】【几】【年】【的】【肩】【膀】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【背】【起】【了】【远】【方】【的】【行】【囊】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【毕】【业】【的】【晚】【宴】【上】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【高】【高】【举】【起】【酒】【杯】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【痛】【饮】【离】【别】【的】【惆】【怅】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【也】【许】【美】【酒】【太】【过】【馨】【香】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【喝】【了】【一】【口】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【儿】【已】【进】【入】【梦】【乡】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【同】【学】【。】【该】【上】【路】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【让】【我】【再】【次】【仔】【细】【看】【看】【你】【的】【脸】【庞】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【让】【我】【再】【次】【为】【你】【背】【好】【行】【囊】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【过】【六】【月】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【心】【里】【满】【是】【惆】【怅】【的】【丁】【香】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【过】【六】【月】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【迎】【接】【新】【的】【曙】【光】【…】【…】胃痉挛【<】【p】【>】【1】【7】【年】【前】【,】【母】【亲】【十】【月】【怀】【胎】【生】【下】【了】【我】【,】【享】【受】【着】【第】【一】【次】【作】【为】【人】【母】【的】【喜】【悦】【,】【却】【也】【承】【担】【许】【多】【艰】【辛】【,】【在】【夜】【深】【人】【静】【之】【时】【,】【给】【我】【喂】【奶】【,】【在】【艳】【阳】【高】【照】【之】【时】【,】【为】【我】【换】【洗】【尿】【布】【。】【再】【稍】【大】【些】【,】【父】【亲】【牵】【着】【我】【在】【公】【园】【蹒】【跚】【学】【步】【,】【母】【亲】【在】【旁】【边】【教】【我】【呀】【呀】【学】【语】【,】【这】【都】【是】【父】【母】【在】【为】【我】【默】【默】【付】【出】【。】【上】【了】【高】【中】【,】【早】【晨】【起】【床】【的】【一】【杯】【热】【牛】【奶】【,】【中】【午】【回】【家】【已】【经】【做】【好】【的】【午】【饭】【,】【晚】【上】【提】【前】【泡】【好】【的】【茉】【莉】【花】【茶】【。】【这】【一】【点】【点】【的】【关】【心】【与】【无】【微】【不】【至】【,】【是】【父】【母】【为】【作】【为】【子】【女】【的】【我】【无】【数】【次】【设】【身】【处】【地】【的】【着】【想】【后】【换】【来】【的】【结】【果】【。】【父】【母】【的】【关】【系】【怀】【如】【春】【天】【细】【雨】【,】【润】【物】【无】【声】【!】【可】【是】【处】【于】【青】【春】【期】【的】【我】【,】【却】【不】【懂】【父】【母】【的】【良】【苦】【用】【心】【,】【一】【点】【生】【活】【上】【的】【不】【如】【意】【,】【或】【者】【学】【习】【上】【的】【不】【顺】【,】【就】【会】【与】【父】【母】【大】【吵】【一】【架】【。】【在】【此】【,】【我】【想】【诚】【挚】【地】【对】【父】【母】【说】【一】【句】【:】【对】【不】【起】【,】【我】【会】【孝】【敬】【你】【们】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

胃痉挛:传家宝制的太医,到底知道皓朝皇帝为什么短命了

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【是】【中】【考】【语】【文】【试】【卷】【中】【的】【“】【半】【壁】【江】【山】【”】【,】【它】【需】【要】【精】【益】【求】【精】【,】【才】【能】【在】【众】【多】【优】【秀】【作】【文】【中】【脱】【颖】【而】【出】【。】【得】【到】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【的】【青】【睐】【,】【从】【而】【获】【取】【高】【分】【。】【纵】【观】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【中】【考】【满】【分】【作】【文】【,】【不】【难】【发】【现】【,】【文】【章】【中】【无】【不】【闪】【烁】【着】【一】【个】【“】【精】【”】【字】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【精】【深】【的】【主】【题】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【主】【题】【是】【文】【章】【的】【灵】【魂】【,】【作】【文】【没】【有】【高】【远】【的】【主】【题】【就】【会】【显】【得】【低】【俗】【浅】【薄】【。】【只】【有】【积】【极】【、】【精】【深】【的】【主】【题】【才】【会】【得】【到】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【的】【赏】【识】【。】【如】【湖】【南】【邵】【阳】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【中】【考】【满】【分】【作】【文】【《】【冬】【天】【里】【的】【一】【缕】【阳】【光】【》】【就】【是】【撷】【取】【生】【活】【中】【的】【小】【片】【断】【,】【通】【过】【描】【写】【“】【一】【句】【叮】【咛】【”】【“】【一】【份】【关】【怀】【”】【来】【体】【现】【赞】【美】【美】【好】【生】【活】【的】【大】【主】【题】【。】【又】【如】【湖】【北】【荆】【州】【市】【某】【考】【生】【的】【《】【聆】【听】【生】【命】【拔】【节】【的】【声】【音】【》】【,】【就】【是】【用】【“】【童】【稚】【之】【声】【—】【—】【短】【笛】【无】【腔】【信】【口】【吹】【”】【“】【豆】【蔻】【之】【声】【—】【—】【羌】【笛】【何】【须】【怨】【杨】【柳】【”】【“】【花】【季】【之】【声】【—】【—】【玉】【笛】【叫】【空】【阔】【”】【三】【个】【小】【标】【题】【,】【写】【出】【自】【己】【“】【童】【稚】【”】【时】【喜】【欢】【吃】【田】【鸡】【肉】【,】【“】【豆】【蔻】【”】【时】【懂】【得】【青】【蛙】【是】【益】【类】【动】【物】【,】【“】【花】【季】【”】【时】【却】【积】【极】【宣】【传】【保】【护】【青】【蛙】【及】【有】【益】【动】【物】【。】【这】【成】【长】【的】【声】【音】【吹】【响】【了】【“】【保】【护】【生】【态】【”】【这】【一】【大】【主】【题】【,】【从】【而】【夺】【得】【高】【分】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【中】【,】【我】【们】【同】【样】【也】【可】【以】【从】【极】【其】【普】【通】【的】【身】【边】【小】【事】【中】【挖】【掘】【出】【鲜】【明】【深】【刻】【的】【主】【题】【。】【如】【汇】【聚】【厚】【重】【历】【史】【的】【老】【传】【统】【;】【凝】【聚】【时】【代】【气】【息】【的】【新】【气】【象】【;】【颂】【扬】【祖】【国】【河】【山】【的】【美】【好】【;】【倡】【导】【绿】【色】【环】【保】【的】【重】【要】【…】【…】【总】【之】【,】【生】【活】【的】【丰】【富】【多】【彩】【可】【以】【使】【我】【们】【的】【作】【文】【异】【彩】【纷】【呈】【,】【意】【蕴】【厚】【重】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【精】【妙】【的】【开】【头】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【常】【言】【道】【“】【明】【眸】【善】【睐】【第】【一】【瞥】【”】【。】【文】【章】【如】【果】【有】【~】【个】【精】【妙】【的】【开】【头】【,】【就】【会】【吸】【引】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【的】【眼】【球】【,】【让】【人】【有】【一】【种】【赏】【心】【悦】【目】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【全】【国】【中】【考】【满】【分】【作】【文】【中】【有】【这】【样】【几】【种】【成】【功】【的】【开】【头】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【环】【境】【渲】【染】【气】【氛】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【夜】【死】【了】【,】【黑】【暗】【统】【治】【着】【这】【个】【世】【界】【,】【灯】【光】【死】【去】【时】【发】【出】【的】【凄】【惨】【叫】【声】【还】【在】【空】【中】【荡】【漾】【,】【虽】【然】【声】【音】【很】【低】【却】【是】【无】【处】【不】【在】【,】【角】【落】【里】【也】【似】【乎】【有】【极】【其】【低】【微】【的】【哭】【泣】【。】【手】【捧】【着】【一】【张】【张】【写】【满】【愁】【容】【的】【试】【卷】【让】【我】【感】【到】【未】【来】【的】【渺】【茫】【,】【欢】【乐】【的】【时】【期】【已】【经】【过】【去】【,】【现】【在】【是】【悲】【戚】【的】【时】【候】【了】【。】【(】【《】【看】【着】【前】【方】【》】【牡】【丹】【江】【市】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【开】【篇】【环】【境】【描】【写】【的】【巧】【妙】【运】【用】【,】【创】【设】【了】【一】【种】【独】【特】【的】【意】【境】【,】【已】【将】【人】【物】【内】【心】【展】【现】【得】【淋】【漓】【尽】【致】【,】【扣】【住】【了】【读】【者】【心】【弦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【名】【言】【诗】【句】【引】【用】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【《】【孙】【子】【兵】【法】【》】【云】【:】【千】【千】【为】【敌】【,】【一】【人】【胜】【之】【,】【未】【若】【自】【胜】【,】【为】【战】【中】【上】【。】【(】【《】【战】【胜】【自】【己】【百】【战】【不】【殆】【》】【广】【西】【河】【池】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【开】【篇】【即】【引】【用】【了】【《】【孙】【子】【兵】【法】【》】【中】【的】【名】【句】【来】【表】【达】【自】【己】【的】【观】【点】【,】【有】【着】【纲】【举】【目】【张】【的】【作】【用】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【设】【问】【反】【问】【悬】【念】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【条】【街】【你】【熟】【悉】【吗】【?】【熟】【悉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【聆】【听】【到】【这】【街】【的】【声】【音】【吗】【?】【没】【有】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【欣】【赏】【过】【这】【街】【的】【美】【景】【吗】【?】【没】【有】【。】【(】【《】【熟】【悉】【的】【地】【方】【也】【有】【风】【景】【》】【苏】【州】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【此】【文】【以】【设】【问】【句】【起】【笔】【,】【开】【篇】【就】【设】【置】【悬】【念】【,】【老】【街】【既】【然】【熟】【悉】【,】【却】【为】【什】【么】【没】【有】【聆】【听】【过】【声】【音】【也】【没】【有】【欣】【赏】【过】【美】【景】【?】【这】【不】【是】【与】【文】【章】【题】【目】【矛】【盾】【吗】【?】【开】【篇】【就】【激】【发】【着】【读】【者】【的】【阅】【读】【兴】【趣】【。】【这】【也】【自】【然】【引】【出】【了】【下】【文】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【4】【.】【开】【宗】【明】【义】【题】【记】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【爱】【,】【无】【声】【,】【照】【亮】【了】【天】【空】【;】【爱】【,】【无】【言】【,】【滋】【润】【了】【心】【田】【。】【多】【想】【留】【住】【一】【段】【时】【光】【,】【留】【住】【你】【的】【容】【颜】【。】【你】【的】【馈】【赠】【如】【那】【滔】【滔】【江】【水】【,】【一】【生】【用】【之】【不】【竭】【。】【—】【—】【题】【记】【(】【《】【父】【亲】【的】【馈】【赠】【》】【山】【东】【淄】【博】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【者】【巧】【妙】【运】【用】【题】【记】【,】【把】【文】【章】【的】【主】【旨】【表】【达】【出】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【5】【.】【自】【然】【起】【笔】【点】【题】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【种】【把】【事】【情】【的】【开】【头】【作】【为】【文】【章】【开】【头】【的】【自】【然】【起】【笔】【法】【,】【它】【的】【风】【格】【朴】【素】【自】【然】【,】【有】【韵】【味】【天】【成】【的】【效】【果】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【学】【校】【三】【令】【五】【申】【说】【不】【准】【带】【手】【机】【到】【校】【,】【你】【们】【家】【长】【为】【什】【么】【老】【是】【纵】【容】【孩】【子】【,】【不】【与】【学】【校】【保】【持】【一】【致】【呢】【?】【”】【老】【师】【最】【后】【几】【句】【话】【几】【乎】【是】【吼】【出】【来】【的】【,】【满】【含】【不】【满】【与】【责】【备】【。】【妈】【妈】【小】【心】【翼】【翼】【地】【赔】【着】【不】【是】【,】【那】【神】【情】【那】【态】【度】【那】【是】【她】【平】【常】【的】【样】【子】【吗】【?】【(】【《】【拥】【抱】【》】【四】【川】【成】【都】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【样】【开】【头】【简】【洁】【明】【了】【,】【一】【下】【子】【就】【将】【读】【者】【带】【入】【了】【情】【境】【中】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【精】【瑟】【的】【精】【节】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【文】【似】【看】【山】【不】【喜】【平】【”】【,】【精】【彩】【的】【情】【节】【仿】【佛】【引】【领】【读】【者】【在】【旖】【旎】【风】【光】【中】【穿】【行】【,】【或】【“】【柳】【暗】【花】【明】【又】【一】【村】【”】【或】【“】【横】【看】【成】【岭】【侧】【成】【峰】【”】【或】【“】【曲】【径】【通】【幽】【处】【”】【,】【使】【读】【者】【在】【曲】【折】【与】【起】【伏】【中】【心】【潮】【澎】【湃】【,】【获】【得】【无】【限】【乐】【趣】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【为】【了】【优】【化】【情】【节】【,】【追】【求】【曲】【折】【有】【致】【,】【有】【些】【作】【品】【或】【张】【弛】【有】【度】【或】【悬】【念】【迭】【起】【,】【或】【虚】【实】【相】【生】【或】【双】【线】【交】【替】【。】【跌】【宕】【起】【伏】【的】【情】【节】【使】【故】【事】【波】【澜】【起】【伏】【,】【扣】【人】【心】【弦】【。】【“】【情】【节】【突】【转】【”】【的】【手】【法】【,】【令】【人】【拍】【案】【叫】【绝】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【期】【末】【考】【试】【到】【了】【,】【我】【聚】【精】【会】【神】【地】【趴】【在】【桌】【子】【上】【复】【习】【着】【。】【不】【知】【何】【时】【,】【阳】【光】【笼】【罩】【了】【我】【,】【使】【我】【额】【头】【沁】【出】【了】【汗】【珠】【。】【这】【时】【,】【数】【学】【老】【师】【又】【一】【次】【敲】【响】【了】【我】【的】【桌】【子】【:】【“】【你】【,】【坐】【到】【那】【边】【去】【考】【试】【。】【”】【我】【愣】【住】【了】【。】【老】【师】【竟】【然】【对】【我】【如】【此】【不】【信】【任】【!】【老】【师】【对】【我】【的】【成】【见】【竟】【然】【有】【这】【么】【深】【!】【我】【再】【也】【忍】【耐】【不】【住】【,】【泪】【水】【就】【要】【冲】【出】【眼】【眶】【了】【。】【老】【师】【也】【愣】【住】【了】【,】【随】【即】【,】【他】【似】【乎】【明】【白】【了】【什】【么】【,】【轻】【轻】【地】【对】【我】【说】【:】【“】【这】【里】【太】【晒】【,】【影】【响】【你】【做】【题】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【来】【如】【此】【。】【原】【本】【以】【为】【老】【师】【误】【解】【了】【我】【,】【谁】【知】【却】【是】【我】【误】【解】【了】【老】【师】【!】【我】【的】【泪】【水】【不】【由】【得】【流】【了】【出】【来】【…】【…】【(】【《】【阳】【光】【灿】【烂】【的】【日】【子】【》】【山】【东】【济】【南】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【是】【一】【件】【考】【试】【时】【调】【换】【座】【位】【的】【平】【常】【小】【事】【,】【被】【作】【者】【精】【心】【打】【造】【后】【,】【使】【文】【章】【前】【后】【隋】【节】【突】【转】【,】【波】【澜】【顿】【生】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【、】【精】【当】【的】【措】【词】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【山】【不】【在】【高】【,】【有】【仙】【则】【名】【;】【水】【不】【在】【深】【,】【有】【龙】【则】【灵】【”】【。】【作】【文】【中】【的】【措】【词】【更】【不】【在】【多】【,】【精】【当】【的】【措】【词】【有】【着】【“】【四】【两】【拨】【千】【斤】【”】【的】【显】【著】【效】【果】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【间】【白】【驹】【过】【隙】【般】【滑】【过】【爸】【爸】【的】【背】【,】【掠】【过】【爷】【爷】【的】【胡】【子】【,】【穿】【过】【我】【的】【指】【间】【,】【而】【我】【的】【那】【颗】【童】【心】【也】【慢】【慢】【成】【长】【了】【。】【(】【《】【长】【大】【的】【童】【心】【》】【浙】【江】【温】【州】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【滑】【”】【“】【掠】【”】【“】【穿】【”】【三】【个】【动】【词】【生】【动】【地】【展】【现】【了】【时】【光】【飞】【逝】【,】【“】【我】【”】【的】【童】【心】【就】【在】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【中】【长】【大】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【天】【空】【不】【宽】【容】【,】【容】【忍】【不】【了】【风】【雨】【雷】【电】【的】【一】【时】【肆】【虐】【,】【何】【来】【它】【的】【辽】【阔】【之】【美】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【大】【海】【不】【宽】【容】【,】【容】【忍】【不】【了】【惊】【涛】【骇】【浪】【的】【一】【时】【猖】【獗】【,】【何】【来】【它】【的】【深】【邃】【之】【美】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【森】【林】【不】【宽】【容】【。】【容】【忍】【不】【了】【弱】【肉】【强】【食】【的】【一】【时】【规】【律】【,】【何】【来】【它】【的】【原】【始】【之】【美】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【宇】【宙】【不】【宽】【容】【,】【容】【忍】【不】【了】【星】【座】【裂】【变】【的】【一】【时】【更】【替】【,】【何】【来】【它】【的】【神】【秘】【之】【美】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【时】【间】【不】【宽】【容】【,】【容】【忍】【不】【了】【各】【色】【人】【等】【的】【一】【时】【虚】【掷】【,】【何】【来】【它】【的】【延】【续】【之】【美】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【是】【宽】【容】【成】【就】【了】【它】【们】【。】【(】【《】【告】【别】【狭】【隘】【之】【心】【》】【一】【考】【毕】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【段】【文】【字】【语】【言】【流】【畅】【,】【用】【词】【精】【练】【,】【运】【用】【铺】【陈】【排】【比】【的】【手】【法】【,】【使】【文】【章】【更】【具】【思】【维】【的】【深】【度】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【五】【、】【精】【练】【的】【叙】【述】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【中】【或】【用】【巧】【妙】【的】【手】【法】【,】【或】【用】【恰】【当】【的】【顺】【序】【,】【使】【叙】【述】【顺】【畅】【精】【彩】【,】【但】【这】【并】【不】【意】【味】【着】【叙】【述】【得】【越】【多】【越】【好】【,】【而】【是】【以】【简】【洁】【明】【了】【为】【妙】【。】【只】【有】【内】【涵】【深】【刻】【、】【情】【节】【生】【动】【、】【能】【突】【出】【主】【题】【的】【具】【体】【材】【料】【才】【详】【写】【,】【次】【要】【作】【用】【的】【内】【容】【就】【只】【能】【作】【概】【括】【叙】【述】【。】【精】【练】【的】【叙】【述】【使】【文】【章】【清】【晰】【利】【落】【,】【结】【构】【紧】【凑】【。】【如】【南】【京】【中】【考】【满】【分】【作】【文】【《】【也】【是】【一】【堂】【语】【文】【课】【》】【是】【从】【不】【同】【角】【度】【选】【择】【典】【型】【事】【例】【来】【突】【出】【中】【心】【的】【。】【有】【给】【网】【上】【的】【信】【箱】【发】【勘】【误】【信】【,】【以】【突】【出】【从】【生】【活】【中】【学】【语】【文】【的】【自】【豪】【感】【受】【;】【有】【参】【加】【学】【校】【艺】【术】【节】【的】【朗】【诵】【表】【演】【活】【动】【,】【以】【突】【出】【从】【生】【活】【中】【学】【语】【文】【的】【成】【果】【;】【有】【春】【节】【家】【庭】【联】【欢】【会】【接】【对】【联】【比】【赛】【,】【以】【突】【出】【从】【生】【活】【中】【学】【语】【文】【的】【快】【乐】【。】【三】【件】【事】【例】【紧】【扣】【生】【活】【“】【也】【是】【一】【堂】【语】【文】【课】【”】【这】【一】【中】【心】【,】【有】【真】【情】【实】【感】【,】【又】【详】【略】【有】【致】【。】【其】【中】【第】【三】【件】【事】【最】【有】【代】【表】【性】【,】【也】【很】【风】【趣】【,】【作】【者】【就】【突】【出】【的】【对】【话】【与】【心】【理】【进】【行】【详】【写】【,】【而】【其】【他】【两】【事】【就】【略】【写】【。】【这】【样】【精】【练】【的】【处】【理】【有】【助】【于】【凸】【现】【文】【章】【主】【旨】【。】胃痉挛【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【常】【常】【想】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【离】【别】【会】【是】【背】【影】【的】【凝】【望】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【把】【身】【躯】【站】【成】【树】【的】【形】【象】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【任】【眼】【泪】【奔】【涌】【、】【泛】【滥】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【常】【常】【想】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【离】【别】【会】【是】【心】【的】【涅】【槃】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【需】【要】【时】【间】【的】【营】【养】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【再】【让】【它】【诞】【生】【、】【成】【长】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【然】【而】【,】【我】【站】【在】【六】【月】【的】【路】【口】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【整】【理】【着】【远】【方】【的】【行】【囊】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【心】【情】【却】【格】【外】【的】【晴】【朗】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【电】【话】【里】【欣】【喜】【地】【告】【诉】【爹】【娘】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【今】【年】【毕】【业】【升】【学】【明】【朗】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【几】【年】【里】【,】【恩】【师】【的】【语】【重】【心】【长】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【足】【够】【支】【撑】【我】【们】【一】【辈】【子】【的】【飞】【翔】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【些】【年】【啊】【,】【教】【学】【楼】【前】【的】【松】【柏】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【可】【曾】【记】【得】【,】【晨】【光】【中】【的】【一】【群】【少】【年】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【脚】【步】【匆】【匆】【,】【眸】【子】【明】【亮】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【课】【堂】【上】【,】【可】【爱】【的】【老】【师】【神】【采】【飞】【扬】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【带】【着】【我】【们】【遨】【游】【知】【识】【的】【殿】【堂】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【有】【什】【么】【更】【叫】【人】【惆】【怅】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【依】【靠】【几】【年】【的】【肩】【膀】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【背】【起】【了】【远】【方】【的】【行】【囊】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【毕】【业】【的】【晚】【宴】【上】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【高】【高】【举】【起】【酒】【杯】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【痛】【饮】【离】【别】【的】【惆】【怅】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【也】【许】【美】【酒】【太】【过】【馨】【香】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【喝】【了】【一】【口】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【儿】【已】【进】【入】【梦】【乡】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【同】【学】【。】【该】【上】【路】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【让】【我】【再】【次】【仔】【细】【看】【看】【你】【的】【脸】【庞】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【让】【我】【再】【次】【为】【你】【背】【好】【行】【囊】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【过】【六】【月】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【心】【里】【满】【是】【惆】【怅】【的】【丁】【香】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【过】【六】【月】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【迎】【接】【新】【的】【曙】【光】【…】【…】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【业】【这】【个】【词】【,】【我】【想】【大】【家】【都】【再】【熟】【悉】【不】【过】【了】【。】【可】【是】【,】【今】【天】【我】【们】【的】【政】【治】【老】【师】【给】【我】【们】【留】【了】【一】【个】【特】【殊】【的】【作】【业】【—】【—】【回】【家】【给】【父】【母】【洗】【手】【洗】【脸】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【放】【学】【的】【路】【上】【,】【我】【冥】【思】【苦】【想】【:】【这】【个】【作】【业】【要】【怎】【么】【说】【,】【怎】【么】【做】【呀】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【回】【家】【后】【,】【正】【好】【要】【开】【饭】【了】【,】【我】【磨】【磨】【蹭】【蹭】【地】【把】【妈】【妈】【拉】【到】【卫】【生】【间】【的】【水】【池】【旁】【,】【吞】【吞】【吐】【吐】【半】【天】【也】【没】【好】【意】【思】【开】【口】【。】【这】【时】【妈】【妈】【可】【急】【了】【:】【“】【你】【有】【什】【么】【事】【,】【赶】【紧】【说】【,】【说】【完】【赶】【紧】【吃】【饭】【吧】【。】【”】【一】【看】【妈】【妈】【着】【急】【了】【,】【就】【想】【豁】【出】【去】【了】【,】【我】【一】【下】【子】【拉】【住】【妈】【妈】【的】【手】【说】【:】【“】【我】【给】【您】【洗】【冼】【手】【吧】【!】【”】【我】【的】【话】【音】【刚】【落】【,】【妈】【妈】【一】【下】【就】【把】【手】【缩】【了】【回】【去】【,】【脸】【红】【着】【说】【:】【“】【我】【又】【不】【是】【小】【孩】【儿】【,】【不】【用】【你】【给】【我】【冼】【,】【等】【我】【老】【了】【不】【能】【动】【的】【时】【候】【你】【再】【孝】【敬】【我】【。】【”】【说】【完】【便】【走】【了】【。】【就】【这】【样】【,】【我】【被】【妈】【妈】【拒】【绝】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【本】【怕】【自】【己】【不】【好】【意】【思】【,】【可】【现】【在】【倒】【是】【妈】【妈】【不】【知】【所】【措】【了】【。】【吃】【完】【饭】【后】【,】【我】【在】【自】【己】【的】【房】【间】【里】【盘】【算】【了】【很】【久】【,】【怎】【么】【才】【能】【让】【妈】【妈】【同】【意】【我】【为】【她】【洗】【手】【洗】【脸】【呢】【?】【这】【时】【想】【到】【“】【一】【鼓】【作】【气】【,】【再】【而】【衰】【,】【三】【而】【竭】【”】【这】【句】【话】【,】【于】【是】【我】【接】【了】【一】【盆】【水】【,】【然】【后】【去】【妈】【妈】【房】【间】【把】【妈】【妈】【硬】【拉】【进】【卫】【生】【间】【,】【没】【等】【妈】【妈】【反】【应】【过】【来】【,】【我】【抓】【住】【妈】【妈】【的】【手】【,】【往】【盆】【里】【一】【放】【,】【便】【不】【管】【不】【顾】【地】【给】【妈】【妈】【冼】【起】【了】【手】【,】【见】【没】【办】【法】【再】【拒】【绝】【了】【,】【妈】【妈】【只】【好】【半】【推】【半】【就】【地】【由】【我】【去】【洗】【了】【。】【冼】【完】【后】【我】【才】【发】【现】【,】【妈】【妈】【的】【手】【上】【竟】【有】【许】【多】【老】【茧】【,】【甚】【至】【有】【的】【地】【方】【还】【裂】【开】【了】【。】【看】【看】【自】【己】【白】【白】【嫩】【嫩】【的】【手】【,】【再】【看】【看】【妈】【妈】【干】【裂】【的】【手】【,】【我】【的】【鼻】【子】【酸】【了】【。】【当】【我】【抬】【头】【时】【,】【看】【到】【妈】【妈】【的】【眼】【睛】【已】【经】【又】【红】【又】【肿】【了】【。】【我】【再】【也】【控】【制】【不】【住】【自】【己】【,】【呜】【咽】【着】【对】【妈】【妈】【说】【:】【“】【妈】【妈】【,】【我】【爱】【您】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【一】【刻】【,】【我】【和】【妈】【妈】【紧】【紧】【地】【拥】【抱】【在】【一】【起】【,】【我】【感】【到】【全】【世】【界】【好】【像】【都】【美】【好】【了】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【特】【殊】【作】【业】【的】【完】【成】【让】【我】【说】【出】【了】【那】【最】【美】【好】【的】【三】【个】【字】【,】【也】【让】【我】【感】【受】【到】【人】【生】【中】【最】【美】【好】【的】【爱】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【情】【感】【真】【切】【自】【然】【,】【无】【矫】【揉】【造】【作】【之】【嫌】【,】【以】【平】【淡】【心】【现】【真】【情】【。】【刻】【画】【细】【致】【,】【描】【写】【生】【动】【。】【首】【尾】【照】【应】【,】【结】【尾】【点】【题】【,】【结】【构】【合】【理】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【刘】【喜】【云】【)】胃痉挛【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【近】【年】【来】【,】【中】【考】【作】【文】【试】【题】【讲】【求】【全】【面】【对】【接】【中】【学】【生】【生】【活】【,】【强】【调】【表】【达】【真】【情】【实】【感】【,】【鼓】【励】【学】【生】【表】【露】【自】【己】【的】【真】【实】【情】【怀】【,】【真】【正】【做】【到】【“】【说】【真】【话】【、】【实】【话】【、】【心】【里】【话】【,】【不】【说】【假】【话】【、】【空】【话】【、】【套】【话】【”】【(】【《】【语】【文】【课】【程】【标】【准】【》】【)】【。】【这】【样】【,】【才】【能】【实】【现】【“】【引】【导】【学】【生】【关】【注】【现】【实】【,】【热】【爱】【生】【活】【,】【表】【达】【真】【情】【实】【感】【”】【的】【目】【标】【。】【因】【此】【,】【命】【题】【者】【常】【着】【眼】【于】【以】【下】【四】【个】【方】【面】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【“】【自】【我】【成】【长】【”】【类】【从】【中】【考】【命】【题】【形】【势】【看】【,】【自】【我】【成】【长】【类】【考】【题】【在】【逐】【年】【升】【温】【。】【专】【家】【预】【测】【,】【在】【推】【行】【课】【程】【改】【革】【、】【强】【调】【人】【文】【关】【怀】【的】【新】【时】【代】【,】【此】【类】【考】【题】【会】【逐】【渐】【成】【为】【命】【题】【的】【核】【心】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【自】【我】【成】【长】【类】【文】【章】【,】【有】【三】【条】【出】【彩】【捷】【径】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【1】【)】【展】【示】【真】【我】【风】【采】【,】【内】【容】【求】【新】【。】【尺】【有】【所】【短】【,】【寸】【有】【所】【长】【,】【也】【许】【你】【无】【法】【在】【课】【堂】【上】【侃】【侃】【而】【谈】【,】【但】【你】【可】【以】【在】【球】【场】【上】【一】【马】【当】【先】【;】【也】【许】【你】【无】【法】【在】【舞】【台】【上】【一】【展】【歌】【喉】【,】【但】【你】【可】【以】【在】【考】【场】【上】【胸】【有】【成】【竹】【…】【…】【只】【要】【我】【们】【找】【准】【了】【自】【我】【的】【闪】【光】【点】【,】【精】【彩】【的】【素】【材】【就】【会】【扑】【面】【而】【来】【。】【比】【如】【你】【爱】【好】【音】【乐】【,】【对】【经】【典】【的】【歌】【词】【与】【动】【听】【的】【旋】【律】【自】【然】【会】【情】【有】【独】【钟】【;】【如】【果】【你】【爱】【好】【文】【学】【,】【名】【言】【佳】【句】【与】【诗】【词】【典】【故】【定】【可】【信】【手】【拈】【来】【。】【只】【要】【你】【爱】【好】【写】【作】【,】【往】【往】【能】【有】【意】【想】【不】【到】【的】【收】【获】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【2】【)】【述】【说】【成】【长】【故】【事】【,】【情】【节】【求】【巧】【。】【人】【生】【路】【上】【,】【不】【会】【一】【帆】【风】【顺】【。】【成】【长】【的】【过】【程】【,】【苦】【辣】【酸】【甜】【咸】【,】【五】【味】【俱】【全】【。】【我】【们】【若】【能】【抓】【住】【这】【一】【点】【做】【文】【章】【,】【情】【节】【自】【然】【会】【波】【澜】【迭】【起】【,】【内】【容】【自】【然】【会】【扣】【人】【心】【弦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【3】【)】【融】【入】【感】【情】【清】【泉】【,】【情】【感】【求】【真】【。】【能】【否】【感】【动】【读】【者】【要】【看】【你】【是】【否】【能】【融】【入】【真】【实】【的】【情】【感】【。】【要】【学】【会】【将】【心】【灵】【深】【处】【最】【精】【彩】【的】【点】【滴】【,】【用】【真】【挚】【的】【感】【情】【诉】【诸】【笔】【端】【,】【这】【样】【,】【一】【个】【表】【情】【或】【—】【个】【动】【作】【,】【也】【许】【就】【是】【一】【道】【风】【景】【,】【细】【细】【地】【品】【味】【起】【来】【,】【那】【酸】【甜】【苦】【辣】【的】【味】【儿】【,】【也】【会】【让】【你】【如】【同】【口】【含】【橄】【榄】【,】【回】【味】【无】【穷】【。】【基】【本】【做】【法】【就】【是】【在】【命】【题】【作】【文】【中】【常】【以】【“】【我】【”】【为】【中】【心】【拟】【定】【,】【比】【如】【“】【我】【和】【”】【“】【我】【多】【么】【想】【”】【“】【我】【的】【特】【长】【”】【“】【没】【想】【到】【我】【如】【此】【”】【“】【为】【自】【己】【而】【骄】【傲】【”】【“】【我】【们】【这】【些】【人】【”】【等】【。】【又】【比】【如】【,】【以】【“】【成】【长】【”】【“】【第】【一】【次】【”】【“】【秘】【密】【”】【“】【个】【性】【”】【“】【朋】【友】【”】【“】【回】【答】【”】【“】【做】【好】【准】【备】【”】【等】【为】【主】【题】【写】【作】【,】【内】【容】【上】【贴】【近】【学】【生】【的】【成】【长】【经】【历】【,】【密】【切】【联】【系】【他】【们】【的】【生】【活】【实】【际】【,】【他】【们】【体】【会】【最】【深】【,】【感】【受】【也】【多】【,】【容】【易】【下】【笔】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【“】【素】【质】【情】【感】【”】【类】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【比】【如】【以】【“】【感】【受】【快】【乐】【”】【“】【喜】【欢】【”】【“】【兑】【现】【诺】【言】【”】【“】【美】【德】【”】【“】【珍】【爱】【”】【“】【吃】【苦】【”】【“】【宽】【容】【”】【“】【体】【谅】【”】【“】【温】【暖】【”】【“】【友】【好】【”】【“】【健】【康】【”】【等】【为】【主】【题】【写】【作】【,】【就】【能】【够】【引】【导】【学】【生】【关】【注】【人】【性】【中】【美】【好】【的】【事】【物】【和】【美】【好】【的】【情】【感】【,】【让】【考】【生】【在】【深】【入】【思】【考】【的】【过】【程】【中】【加】【深】【对】【真】【、】【善】【、】【美】【的】【体】【验】【和】【向】【往】【。】【例】【如】【:】【2】【0】【1】【0】【年】【广】【东】【卷】【:】【“】【那】【天】【,】【我】【见】【到】【了】【快】【乐】【的】【钥】【匙】【”】【;】【2】【0】【1】【0】【年】【江】【苏】【南】【通】【卷】【:】【“】【让】【我】【轻】【轻】【告】【诉】【你】【”】【;】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【安】【徽】【省】【卷】【:】【“】【在】【我】【们】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【”】【;】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【陕】【西】【卷】【:】【“】【我】【想】【看】【见】【你】【的】【笑】【”】【等】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【“】【社】【会】【生】【活】【”】【类】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【比】【如】【以】【“】【奥】【运】【”】【“】【和】【谐】【”】【“】【交】【往】【”】【“】【贫】【困】【”】【“】【公】【开】【”】【“】【帮】【助】【”】【“】【关】【注】【”】【“】【动】【力】【”】【“】【书】【”】【“】【回】【忆】【”】【“】【细】【节】【”】【“】【习】【惯】【”】【“】【学】【习】【”】【“】【水】【”】【等】【为】【主】【题】【写】【作】【,】【可】【以】【引】【导】【学】【生】【关】【注】【身】【边】【的】【热】【点】【话】【题】【,】【放】【眼】【社】【会】【生】【活】【。】【例】【如】【:】【2】【0】【0】【8】【年】【湖】【北】【宜】【昌】【卷】【:】【“】【汶】【川】【地】【震】【有】【巨】【大】【破】【坏】【力】【的】【原】【因】【”】【明】【显】【是】【扣】【“】【四】【川】【汶】【川】【大】【地】【震】【”】【的】【主】【题】【;】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【浙】【江】【嘉】【兴】【卷】【:】【“】【不】【走】【寻】【常】【路】【”】【明】【显】【是】【扣】【“】【周】【杰】【伦】【”】【和】【“】【蔡】【伟】【”】【两】【位】【热】【点】【人】【物】【;】【2】【0】【1】【0】【年】【吉】【林】【卷】【:】【“】【天】【使】【让】【人】【牵】【挂】【”】【明】【显】【是】【扣】【“】【上】【海】【世】【博】【会】【”】【和】【“】【青】【海】【玉】【树】【地】【震】【”】【这】【两】【大】【新】【闻】【事】【件】【。】【再】【如】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【四】【川】【内】【江】【中】【考】【作】【文】【题】【,】【是】【一】【道】【典】【型】【的】【材】【料】【作】【文】【题】【,】【材】【料】【便】【摘】【自】【《】【华】【西】【都】【市】【报】【》】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【4】【.】【“】【想】【象】【创】【新】【”】【类】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【类】【试】【题】【如】【果】【处】【理】【不】【当】【,】【过】【于】【脱】【离】【学】【生】【生】【活】【,】【就】【会】【助】【长】【“】【假】【、】【大】【、】【空】【”】【风】【气】【的】【盛】【行】【。】【命】【题】【时】【要】【有】【利】【于】【写】【作】【者】【从】【生】【活】【出】【发】【,】【大】【胆】【展】【开】【想】【象】【的】【翅】【膀】【。】【如】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【江】【苏】【徐】【州】【卷】【:】【“】【面】【对】【自】【然】【”】【;】【2】【0】【1】【0】【年】【河】【北】【卷】【:】【“】【—】【—】【来】【了】【”】【;】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【山】【东】【德】【州】【卷】【:】【“】【风】【筝】【”】【等】【,】【让】【学】【生】【在】【想】【象】【中】【创】【新】【,】【在】【创】【新】【中】【展】【示】【风】【采】【。】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【个】【煤】【球】【炉】【里】【,】【只】【要】【有】【几】【粒】【烧】【红】【的】【煤】【球】【,】【放】【进】【去】【的】【黑】【煤】【球】【最】【后】【也】【会】【变】【红】【,】【因】【为】【热】【能】【具】【有】【传】【导】【作】【用】【。】【其】【实】【。】【人】【间】【的】【爱】【和】【温】【情】【也】【是】【如】【此】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【超】【市】【收】【款】【处】【。】【人】【们】【排】【起】【了】【长】【长】【的】【队】【,】【等】【待】【着】【付】【款】【。】【突】【然】【谁】【的】【手】【机】【响】【起】【,】【一】【个】【年】【轻】【妈】【妈】【温】【柔】【的】【声】【音】【:】【“】【宝】【宝】【,】【别】【哭】【啊】【,】【妈】【妈】【在】【给】【你】【买】【好】【吃】【的】【呢】【,】【马】【上】【就】【回】【来】【,】【你】【乖】【乖】【坐】【着】【别】【动】【啊】【!】【”】【“】【怎】【么】【?】【孩】【子】【—】【个】【人】【在】【家】【吗】【?】【”】【一】【个】【声】【音】【关】【切】【地】【问】【道】【。】【“】【刚】【5】【岁】【,】【我】【看】【她】【睡】【着】【了】【,】【想】【出】【来】【买】【点】【东】【西】【…】【…】【”】【年】【轻】【妈】【妈】【笑】【笑】【,】【有】【些】【无】【奈】【,】【有】【些】【焦】【急】【。】【“】【那】【站】【我】【这】【儿】【吧】【,】【我】【不】【急】【。】【”】【一】【个】【胖】【阿】【姨】【说】【道】【。】【“】【我】【也】【不】【急】【,】【我】【这】【儿】【靠】【前】【,】【来】【我】【这】【儿】【。】【”】【另】【一】【个】【好】【听】【的】【声】【音】【响】【起】【。】【“】【5】【岁】【孩】【子】【自】【己】【在】【家】【,】【大】【家】【让】【她】【先】【交】【款】【吧】【!】【”】【不】【知】【谁】【喊】【了】【一】【嗓】【子】【。】【“】【谢】【谢】【!】【谢】【谢】【!】【谢】【谢】【…】【…】【”】【不】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【年】【轻】【妈】【妈】【站】【到】【了】【收】【款】【处】【。】【当】【她】【拎】【着】【买】【来】【的】【物】【品】【快】【步】【走】【到】【超】【市】【门】【口】【时】【,】【她】【停】【了】【下】【来】【,】【不】【禁】【回】【头】【朝】【排】【着】【队】【的】【人】【们】【望】【了】【—】【眼】【,】【脸】【上】【写】【满】【了】【感】【激】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【公】【交】【车】【站】【。】【他】【在】【等】【车】【,】【窄】【窄】【的】【雨】【棚】【遮】【不】【住】【肆】【意】【刮】【来】【的】【风】【雨】【,】【他】【后】【悔】【没】【有】【听】【天】【气】【预】【报】【,】【后】【悔】【没】【有】【多】【加】【—】【件】【衣】【服】【,】【带】【一】【件】【雨】【具】【。】【公】【交】【车】【迟】【迟】【不】【来】【,】【他】【禁】【不】【住】【打】【了】【—】【个】【冷】【战】【,】【无】【奈】【地】【摇】【了】【摇】【头】【。】【一】【把】【粉】【色】【的】【花】【伞】【轻】【轻】【举】【过】【他】【的】【头】【顶】【,】【是】【—】【个】【秀】【气】【的】【女】【孩】【儿】【。】【女】【孩】【儿】【朝】【他】【笑】【笑】【,】【那】【笑】【容】【很】【甜】【。】【他】【也】【朝】【女】【孩】【儿】【笑】【笑】【。】【谁】【也】【没】【说】【—】【句】【话】【。】【车】【来】【了】【,】【他】【吃】【力】【地】【上】【车】【,】【女】【孩】【儿】【在】【身】【后】【扶】【了】【他】【一】【下】【。】【车】【开】【动】【了】【,】【女】【孩】【儿】【没】【上】【车】【,】【他】【在】【座】【位】【上】【朝】【外】【看】【,】【找】【到】【了】【雨】【中】【的】【那】【把】【粉】【色】【小】【花】【伞】【,】【是】【那】【么】【美】【丽】【…】【…】【到】【了】【下】【—】【站】【,】【上】【来】【了】【—】【位】【孕】【妇】【,】【他】【连】【忙】【起】【来】【,】【让】【位】【于】【她】【。】【随】【即】【,】【一】【只】【小】【手】【伸】【了】【过】【来】【,】【拉】【了】【拉】【他】【的】【衣】【角】【:】【“】【爷】【爷】【,】【坐】【我】【这】【里】【吧】【!】【”】【一】【回】【头】【,】【一】【个】【小】【男】【孩】【儿】【亮】【晶】【晶】【的】【眼】【睛】【正】【仰】【望】【着】【他】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【盲】【校】【门】【口】【。】【出】【租】【车】【接】【上】【了】【一】【位】【盲】【人】【,】【健】【谈】【的】【师】【傅】【了】【解】【到】【他】【准】【备】【去】【找】【一】【份】【按】【摩】【师】【的】【工】【作】【。】【到】【达】【目】【的】【地】【,】【应】【收】【1】【2】【元】【,】【师】【傅】【对】【小】【伙】【子】【说】【不】【收】【钱】【。】【小】【伙】【子】【坚】【持】【,】【两】【人】【争】【了】【一】【番】【。】【师】【傅】【怕】【别】【人】【误】【会】【他】【要】【占】【盲】【人】【的】【便】【宜】【,】【急】【了】【:】【“】【我】【干】【吗】【挣】【你】【的】【钱】【?】【我】【也】【不】【伟】【大】【,】【但】【我】【挣】【钱】【比】【你】【容】【易】【!】【”】【说】【完】【,】【他】【把】【小】【伙】【子】【扶】【出】【车】【,】【交】【给】【了】【小】【区】【门】【口】【保】【安】【。】【告】【别】【了】【盲】【人】【,】【师】【傅】【掉】【转】【车】【头】【,】【准】【备】【离】【去】【,】【—】【位】【中】【年】【人】【拦】【住】【车】【。】【他】【问】【刚】【才】【是】【怎】【么】【回】【事】【,】【师】【傅】【讲】【起】【盲】【人】【小】【伙】【的】【事】【。】【到】【目】【的】【地】【后】【,】【应】【收】【1】【4】【元】【,】【但】【中】【年】【人】【给】【了】【3】【张】【1】【0】【元】【的】【,】【说】【:】【“】【师】【傅】【,】【别】【找】【钱】【了】【。】【”】【师】【傅】【刚】【要】【推】【辞】【,】【“】【这】【钱】【,】【还】【有】【刚】【才】【那】【个】【小】【伙】【子】【的】【。】【”】【中】【年】【人】【说】【,】【“】【我】【可】【记】【得】【您】【这】【句】【话】【了】【,】【我】【也】【不】【伟】【大】【,】【可】【我】【挣】【钱】【比】【您】【也】【容】【易】【点】【。】【以】【后】【您】【见】【了】【残】【疾】【人】【,】【就】【继】【续】【帮】【他】【们】【吧】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【4】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【公】【交】【车】【上】【。】【女】【司】【机】【对】【着】【一】【位】【刚】【上】【车】【的】【老】【太】【太】【吼】【道】【:】【“】【你】【的】【卡】【不】【能】【用】【,】【看】【看】【清】【楚】【,】【赶】【快】【投】【钞】【票】【吧】【。】【”】【原】【来】【老】【人】【把】【身】【份】【证】【当】【做】【敬】【老】【卡】【了】【。】【尚】【未】【站】【稳】【的】【老】【太】【太】【怯】【怯】【地】【说】【:】【“】【好】【的】【,】【好】【的】【,】【我】【有】【钱】【的】【。】【”】【只】【见】【老】【人】【掏】【出】【一】【个】【手】【绢】【包】【,】【慌】【忙】【在】【里】【头】【寻】【找】【钱】【。】【可】【是】【里】【面】【只】【有】【一】【张】【百】【元】【大】【票】【,】【司】【机】【嘟】【囔】【道】【:】【“】【拿】【张】【大】【票】【吓】【人】【,】【还】【装】【可】【冷】【,】【下】【次】【还】【是】【少】【出】【来】【。】【”】【说】【罢】【,】【一】【踩】【油】【门】【,】【车】【猛】【地】【启】【动】【了】【。】【老】【太】【太】【差】【点】【儿】【摔】【倒】【。】【这】【时】【座】【位】【上】【有】【个】【小】【男】【孩】【儿】【站】【了】【起】【来】【,】【把】【两】【元】【钱】【丢】【进】【了】【钱】【箱】【,】【然】【后】【对】【老】【太】【太】【说】【:】【“】【阿】【婆】【,】【你】【来】【坐】【这】【儿】【。】【”】【并】【扶】【她】【坐】【到】【自】【己】【的】【座】【位】【上】【。】【车】【到】【站】【,】【小】【男】【孩】【儿】【下】【车】【了】【。】【在】【下】【车】【前】【,】【他】【还】【笑】【着】【向】【老】【太】【太】【挥】【了】【挥】【手】【。】【女】【司】【机】【见】【此】【情】【景】【,】【面】【部】【表】【情】【有】【点】【儿】【尴】【尬】【,】【也】【许】【她】【的】【心】【头】【掠】【过】【了】【一】【丝】【惭】【隗】【。】【车】【门】【又】【打】【开】【,】【一】【个】【学】【生】【正】【要】【刷】【卡】【,】【却】【突】【然】【惊】【恐】【地】【发】【现】【交】【通】【卡】【不】【见】【了】【!】【他】【不】【安】【地】【看】【着】【驾】【驶】【座】【上】【的】【女】【司】【机】【,】【犹】【豫】【着】【小】【声】【开】【口】【:】【“】【阿】【姨】【…】【…】【那】【个】【…】【…】【我】【…】【…】【我】【的】【交】【通】【卡】【不】【见】【了】【…】【…】【我】【没】【零】【钱】【…】【…】【”】【鼓】【着】【勇】【气】【说】【完】【,】【便】【紧】【张】【地】【看】【着】【对】【方】【。】【这】【时】【车】【门】【关】【上】【的】【声】【音】【突】【然】【传】【来】【,】【学】【生】【暗】【自】【庆】【幸】【,】【看】【来】【不】【会】【被】【赶】【下】【车】【了】【。】【就】【在】【这】【时】【,】【女】【司】【机】【慢】【悠】【悠】【地】【拿】【起】【水】【瓶】【喝】【了】【口】【水】【,】【不】【急】【不】【慢】【地】【说】【道】【:】【“】【没】【带】【啊】【?】【那】【这】【次】【就】【算】【了】【。】【下】【次】【你】【如】【果】【见】【到】【是】【我】【开】【车】【,】【就】【多】【刷】【一】【次】【,】【记】【住】【就】【行】【了】【。】【这】【次】【不】【要】【紧】【的】【。】【现】【在】【读】【书】【也】【不】【容】【易】【啊】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【5】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【位】【摄】【影】【发】【烧】【友】【去】【大】【山】【深】【处】【采】【风】【。】【那】【天】【清】【晨】【,】【他】【手】【端】【相】【机】【,】【望】【着】【山】【崖】【下】【简】【陋】【的】【校】【舍】【前】【,】【十】【几】【个】【稚】【气】【的】【小】【学】【生】【在】【老】【师】【手】【风】【琴】【拉】【出】【来】【的】【走】【调】【的】【国】【歌】【声】【中】【,】【向】【着】【徐】【徐】【升】【起】【的】【国】【旗】【行】【着】【少】【先】【队】【队】【礼】【,】【他】【突】【然】【泪】【流】【满】【面】【。】【晨】【光】【下】【,】【远】【处】【连】【绵】【不】【断】【的】【山】【峦】【展】【示】【着】【雄】【浑】【的】【力】【量】【,】【他】【的】【心】【瞬】【间】【被】【山】【间】【的】【太】【阳】【点】【亮】【了】【。】【回】【去】【后】【,】【他】【随】【那】【张】【照】【片】【还】【寄】【来】【了】【1】【0】【0】【0】【元】【人】【民】【币】【,】【说】【是】【给】【学】【校】【增】【添】【些】【教】【学】【用】【具】【或】【买】【些】【课】【外】【书】【。】【第】【二】【个】【月】【,】【这】【所】【小】【学】【收】【到】【了】【更】【多】【的】【钱】【,】【还】【有】【书】【籍】【、】【衣】【物】【…】【…】【因】【为】【摄】【影】【师】【的】【同】【事】【都】【看】【到】【了】【那】【张】【照】【片】【,】【也】【知】【道】【了】【学】【校】【的】【贫】【寒】【以】【及】【他】【寄】【钱】【的】【事】【。】【一】【年】【之】【后】【的】【夏】【天】【,】【这】【些】【山】【里】【的】【孩】【子】【被】【那】【些】【不】【知】【名】【的】【哥】【哥】【姐】【姐】【们】【邀】【请】【到】【北】【京】【观】【看】【天】【安】【门】【广】【场】【的】【升】【旗】【仪】【式】【,】【当】【国】【旗】【在】【雄】【壮】【的】【国】【歌】【声】【中】【升】【起】【的】【时】【候】【,】【他】【们】【个】【个】【热】【泪】【盈】【眶】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【五】【则】【小】【故】【事】【各】【有】【特】【点】【,】【但】【都】【告】【诉】【我】【们】【,】【一】【个】【人】【做】【了】【件】【好】【事】【,】【即】【能】【引】【起】【连】【锁】【反】【应】【,】【爱】【心】【富】【有】【巨】【大】【的】【感】【染】【力】【,】【正】【如】【文】【题】【所】【示】【,】【温】【情】【有】【着】【传】【导】【作】【用】【。】【读】【了】【此】【文】【,】【文】【中】【洋】【溢】【的】【温】【情】【也】【传】【导】【至】【我】【们】【的】【心】【头】【。】【生】【活】【虽】【有】【诸】【多】【的】【不】【如】【意】【处】【,】【但】【毕】【竟】【还】【是】【有】【许】【多】【美】【好】【的】【东】【西】【。】【它】【也】【让】【我】【们】【明】【白】【,】【与】【其】【埋】【怨】【世】【风】【日】【下】【,】【还】【不】【如】【每】【个】【人】【从】【我】【做】【起】【,】【从】【小】【事】【做】【起】【,】【如】【此】【,】【社】【会】【风】【气】【的】【改】【善】【便】【可】【期】【待】【,】【生】【活】【就】【能】【变】【得】【更】【加】【美】【好】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【的】【完】【成】【并】【非】【一】【日】【,】【这】【五】【件】【事】【也】【并】【非】【全】【是】【作】【者】【亲】【身】【所】【遇】【。】【小】【杨】【同】【学】【告】【诉】【我】【,】【其】【中】【第】【三】【、】【第】【五】【两】【件】【事】【来】【自】【于】【平】【时】【听】【广】【播】【和】【看】【电】【视】【,】【当】【时】【觉】【得】【很】【受】【感】【动】【,】【事】【后】【就】【随】【手】【记】【下】【了】【,】【到】【了】【写】【的】【时】【候】【才】【把】【它】【们】【“】【镶】【入】【”】【了】【文】【中】【。】【我】【很】【欣】【赏】【他】【用】【的】【“】【镶】【入】【”】【这】【个】【词】【,】【镰】【入】【,】【不】【是】【生】【硬】【地】【拼】【接】【,】【而】【是】【自】【然】【贴】【切】【地】【组】【合】【。】【从】【媒】【体】【宣】【传】【中】【汲】【取】【写】【作】【的】【思】【想】【和】【材】【料】【,】【无】【疑】【是】【学】【生】【学】【习】【写】【作】【、】【提】【高】【作】【文】【质】【量】【的】【一】【条】【途】【径】【。】【我】【在】【有】【的】【文】【章】【中】【提】【过】【,】【“】【草】【船】【借】【箭】【”】【不】【失】【为】【丰】【富】【作】【文】【内】【容】【之】【一】【法】【。】【事】【实】【证】【明】【,】【各】【种】【媒】【体】【宣】【传】【给】【我】【们】【提】【供】【了】【大】【量】【的】【“】【箭】【”】【,】【你】【完】【全】【可】【以】【借】【来】【射】【向】【自】【己】【的】【目】【标】【。】【但】【凡】【作】【文】【,】【如】【果】【所】【写】【之】【事】【必】【亲】【历】【亲】【为】【,】【则】【必】【造】【成】【视】【野】【的】【狭】【小】【和】【思】【路】【的】【逼】【仄】【,】【况】【且】【“】【借】【箭】【”】【并】【非】【易】【事】【,】【“】【箭】【”】【不】【是】【随】【便】【可】【以】【借】【到】【的】【,】【首】【先】【需】【要】【大】【量】【吸】【纳】【和】【接】【受】【,】【这】【才】【有】【“】【箭】【”】【可】【借】【,】【有】【箭】【可】【储】【,】【另】【外】【,】【有】【了】【“】【箭】【”】【,】【还】【要】【能】【有】【的】【放】【矢】【,】【这】【些】【都】【需】【有】【智】【慧】【和】【方】【法】【。】【本】【文】【第】【三】【、】【第】【五】【两】【件】【事】【已】【与】【全】【文】【自】【然】【融】【为】【一】【体】【,】【这】【也】【说】【明】【小】【杨】【同】【学】【善】【于】【“】【拿】【来】【”】【,】【善】【于】【“】【引】【进】【外】【资】【”】【,】【使】【之】【为】【己】【所】【用】【,】【为】【文】【增】【色】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【位】【作】【家】【说】【,】【写】【人】【的】【转】【变】【是】【很】【难】【的】【。】【事】【实】【上】【,】【人】【确】【实】【也】【难】【以】【转】【变】【。】【但】【文】【中】【的】【那】【个】【女】【司】【机】【的】【转】【变】【,】【就】【显】【得】【真】【实】【而】【自】【然】【。】【她】【先】【是】【态】【度】【很】【凶】【地】【对】【待】【忘】【带】【敬】【老】【卡】【的】【老】【太】【太】【,】【后】【则】【和】【蔼】【宽】【容】【地】【对】【待】【那】【个】【遗】【失】【了】【交】【通】【卡】【的】【学】【生】【,】【前】【后】【可】【谓】【判】【若】【两】【人】【,】【何】【故】【也】【?】【原】【来】【是】【那】【个】【为】【老】【太】【太】【付】【了】【车】【费】【并】【给】【她】【让】【座】【的】【小】【男】【孩】【儿】【触】【动】【了】【她】【的】【心】【灵】【。】【一】【个】【小】【孩】【儿】【尚】【能】【懂】【得】【尊】【重】【老】【人】【,】【而】【她】【却】【伤】【害】【了】【她】【。】【这】【个】【小】【孩】【儿】【以】【自】【己】【的】【行】【动】【给】【她】【E】【了】【一】【课】【,】【可】【谓】【“】【此】【时】【无】【声】【胜】【有】【声】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【有】【场】【面】【和】【细】【节】【的】【描】【写】【,】【也】【有】【^】【物】【的】【表】【情】【、】【语】【言】【、】【动】【作】【等】【,】【但】【都】【是】【简】【练】【的】【白】【描】【,】【没】【有】【渲】【染】【,】【没】【有】【烘】【托】【,】【叙】【事】【也】【洗】【练】【,】【毫】【不】【拖】【泥】【带】【水】【。】【这】【说】【明】【作】【者】【有】【较】【强】【的】【驾】【驭】【文】【字】【的】【能】【力】【。】【在】【许】【多】【同】【学】【的】【语】【言】【尚】【属】【粗】【制】【滥】【造】【的】【情】【况】【下】【,】【作】【者】【在】【语】【言】【的】【运】【用】【上】【已】【有】【着】【自】【己】【的】【审】【美】【取】【向】【,】【似】【已】【初】【步】【形】【成】【自】【己】【的】【风】【格】【,】【何】【等】【的】【可】【贵】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【的】【结】【构】【也】【值】【得】【一】【提】【。】【我】【称】【之】【为】【“】【板】【块】【式】【”】【结】【构】【。】【传】【统】【写】【作】【理】【论】【十】【分】【重】【视】【文】【章】【结】【构】【,】【讲】【究】【首】【尾】【曲】【折】【、】【衔】【接】【过】【渡】【、】【文】【脉】【条】【理】【、】【铺】【垫】【照】【应】【、】【抑】【扬】【详】【略】【等】【等】【,】【许】【多】【流】【传】【下】【来】【的】【文】【章】【都】【有】【结】【构】【匀】【称】【稳】【固】【、】【严】【密】【精】【致】【的】【特】【点】【。】【但】【堤】【,】【在】【结】【构】【上】【过】【于】【追】【求】【细】【密】【周】【全】【,】【不】【仅】【要】【花】【费】【很】【多】【心】【血】【,】【有】【时】【还】【会】【对】【思】【想】【感】【情】【的】【抒】【发】【造】【成】【一】【种】【束】【缚】【,】【对】【初】【学】【写】【作】【者】【尤】【为】【不】【利】【。】【而】【此】【文】【的】【板】【块】【式】【结】【构】【却】【简】【明】【、】【自】【然】【、】【易】【学】【。】【讲】【究】【结】【构】【的】【目】【的】【无】【非】【是】【使】【文】【章】【的】【结】【构】【成】【为】【一】【个】【有】【机】【的】【整】【体】【,】【而】【板】【块】【式】【结】【构】【虽】【然】【简】【化】【了】【结】【构】【,】【但】【文】【章】【的】【整】【体】【感】【并】【未】【削】【弱】【,】【也】【许】【它】【省】【略】【的】【是】【一】【些】【外】【在】【的】【形】【式】【,】【追】【求】【的】【是】【一】【种】【“】【意】【合】【”】【。】【它】【似】【乎】【更】【适】【合】【现】【代】【人】【的】【阅】【读】【口】【味】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【荐】【评】【老】【师】【:】【毛】【荣】【富】【)】

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